Hunted: Part 1 - pg 28
Nepath on May 5, 2010
So last week Energize gave a deadline of 24 hours to the Commander and here we find ourselves 5 hours later and starting to wrap up this chapter with the first twist in this story…
The Commander gets a snazzy new costume - more on that next couple of pages and if you read the first Energize story, you should have a pretty good idea who she is talking to!!
BTW - I have purposefully turned the Commander red headed again - this is because you the readers made it clear you prefer it that way.
Thanks for reading and commenting.
Tolrick at 12:56PM, Sept. 5, 2012
and one page later I'm for both sides wiping each other out. Nepath, do you have any heroes who actually -are- heroic?
Abt_Nihil at 7:42AM, May 12, 2010
Whoo-- I caught up! What a great read! Another leap artwise, but what's more important, some of the things which seemed very puzzling at the beginning of the chapter now make perfect sense. Love the way you constructed this story! I could never quite believe that the HU Commander would just make obvious mistakes in handling the Nemesis/Misty thing. I can't wait to find out her ultimate motive. I think we know a lot about Energize's motivation, and from his POV, it was HU who escalated the situation. So he's not completely wrong... he's taking things further than he should, but he's well justified. But I believe the HU Commander must have a very good reason for doing what she's doing... I can only hope that she's not "jusr" a villain. Morally questionable, yes, without a doubt, but that's where the fun is in stories like these! Again, great job!
Braindonor at 10:38PM, May 8, 2010
Is Chegwin her father? That would explain a lot.
Xade at 12:56AM, May 8, 2010
unstable indeed
legacyhero at 4:17PM, May 6, 2010
Old hair...new costume...what will happen next?? Can't wait!!
Sebastian_Sandberg at 11:42AM, May 6, 2010
... Okay, I'm officially not siding with either Energize or the HU. If the corruption runs this deep, then I'll just wait and see what more will b revealed in next issue. Well done, mate! ^^
SoItBegins at 9:16AM, May 6, 2010
!!
Josh Holley at 6:35AM, May 6, 2010
I'll send you a bill for my JAW and floorboards soon... =P NICE PAGE! And yes, you called it on the Relik thing, sir!
LuchaCoffee at 6:14AM, May 6, 2010
Holy...What a twist, I always thought there was something errie about her.
Hyp3rB14d3 at 1:59AM, May 6, 2010
Huh. So the commander WAS a villain after all.
AzuJOD at 12:45AM, May 6, 2010
There goes my theory that her blonde hair was going to a plot point or something.
Legend Comics at 10:14PM, May 5, 2010
This just got a whole lot more complicated. Good work! And cool costume change. From what I see it should be pretty bad ass.