magickmaker at 6:10PM, Dec. 10, 2006

...I'm not sure how Christopher Paolini would feel about this comic. You're building off of a good story, though as it is copyrighted, you leave yourself open to lawsuit. You draw well for a beginner, though your linework could use work and the text is interesting. I'd like to see you try making your own storyline. You seem smart enough to create your own characters and create a good original comic. I think you could do really well.