great job at making a mundane scene interesting with the passing conversations and the alluding to undisclosed past events. well done. since the last page was nighttime I assume this to be as well...the word balloons should help balance page quite nicely.
If they're doing it like I used to mlai, they're deleting the page and re-adding it.
You don't have to do that, just make sure you hold down shift and then hit: refresh/reload on your browser.
Useful trick.
I love the inking and the knowledge of decrepit/weathered stonework.
Hmm, what's wrong with a purty mouth? :D
Are all the comments getting deleted when you update this page to color?
Carbajal3000 at 9:58PM, March 7, 2008
cool.
Rockster1039 at 5:32PM, March 7, 2008
fav'd
jerry at 4:31PM, March 7, 2008
great work!
lba at 3:00PM, March 7, 2008
A lot of content in this page. It makes for a satisfying update to read.
Elaine at 2:46PM, March 7, 2008
The city is really starting to remind me of Irontown in Priness Mononoke. And the guard's armor looks fun to draw.
JustNoPoint at 12:24PM, March 7, 2008
Love your inks so much!
TheMidge28 at 8:10AM, March 7, 2008
great job at making a mundane scene interesting with the passing conversations and the alluding to undisclosed past events. well done. since the last page was nighttime I assume this to be as well...the word balloons should help balance page quite nicely.
amanda at 7:30AM, March 7, 2008
Seconded, thirded, (fourth-ed) - the exchanges here are great. I think I will like "the boss."
crifmer at 7:07AM, March 7, 2008
I guess that guard never saw Deliverance. Heh. I *love* this comic. Totally hooked.
skythorn at 5:13AM, March 7, 2008
yep - good dialogue, good drawing. Excellent dialogue - I think the page will be filled a tad too much after being coloured, but right now it's fine.
Frostflowers at 3:57AM, March 7, 2008
Hahaha - I like the touch of daily life, especially in the last panel. XD The dialogue sounds very natural - well done!
Doctor Shadow at 1:47AM, March 7, 2008
If they're doing it like I used to mlai, they're deleting the page and re-adding it. You don't have to do that, just make sure you hold down shift and then hit: refresh/reload on your browser. Useful trick.
mlai at 12:43AM, March 7, 2008
I love the inking and the knowledge of decrepit/weathered stonework. Hmm, what's wrong with a purty mouth? :D Are all the comments getting deleted when you update this page to color?
DAJB at 11:34PM, March 6, 2008
Heh - nice exchanges here!