Um...o.k
1.) How did Chaos get out of The Master Emerald? So, that's a plot hole :P
2.) Um...if you haven't finished Sonic The Hedgehog 2006, Mephiles is...um...how sould I say this, erased from reality :P So another plot hole :P
3.) Why the hell are they yelling what they're doing? Doesn't mean that your telling the enemy what you're doing? (whatever)
4.) Damn! Chaos can sure move fast!
5.) Is Espio about to throw a physical object at Chaos? Isn't he...well, made of water?
[b]Your score:[/b]
Your textboxes are well done, but just get rid of the colored outline, the colored words are good enough...
The placement of the sprites are good as well but in panel two, you fail to put the died robots in place.(unless they got disintegrated...)
Your spelling is o.k but in panel three...
[quote=Thrash]Espio,take care of Chaos [color=red]we got theses![/color][/quote]
...That sounds a bit retarded :P
In all this is an o.k sprite comic :D So my good sir, you get...
[size=15]A FOUR![/size]
Espio at 4:11PM, April 12, 2007
Yea i agree
Flame the Hybrid at 3:29PM, April 12, 2007
@ Espio: Yeah, you could find a way to get around Chaos but for Mephiles...that's going to be a bit hard :P
Espio at 3:08PM, April 12, 2007
hey thanks but about the chaos and the mephiles i have a plan for them
Flame the Hybrid at 2:44PM, April 12, 2007
Um...o.k 1.) How did Chaos get out of The Master Emerald? So, that's a plot hole :P 2.) Um...if you haven't finished Sonic The Hedgehog 2006, Mephiles is...um...how sould I say this, erased from reality :P So another plot hole :P 3.) Why the hell are they yelling what they're doing? Doesn't mean that your telling the enemy what you're doing? (whatever) 4.) Damn! Chaos can sure move fast! 5.) Is Espio about to throw a physical object at Chaos? Isn't he...well, made of water? [b]Your score:[/b] Your textboxes are well done, but just get rid of the colored outline, the colored words are good enough... The placement of the sprites are good as well but in panel two, you fail to put the died robots in place.(unless they got disintegrated...) Your spelling is o.k but in panel three... [quote=Thrash]Espio,take care of Chaos [color=red]we got theses![/color][/quote] ...That sounds a bit retarded :P In all this is an o.k sprite comic :D So my good sir, you get... [size=15]A FOUR![/size]