I really like reviewing these sprite comics. Now let's see...
Well, your textboxes look kinda crappy and in my last comment I said make the outline of the boxes black not the outline [b]and[/b] the words...oh well...
Your placement could be better as in the first panel Chaos's attack is going into the bridge...that looks kinda weird :P And in the last panel, where did his huge ninja star go? That right there is anothor bad placement :P
And like Wes said "I smell a Naruto-cliche about to happen here with Espio."
Don't do a Naruto parody if it's with Espio, it's been done to many times in the past :P
So, yeah this isn't one of your best, so I'm going to have to give you anothor four :P
Muting me on the other page is not going to help anything to do with your comic.I'm just trying to help you. I said nothing offensive in my other comment and you have no reason to mute it.
Once again give credit to the rippers and makers of the
sprites. They spent a long time making them and they all require credit if used. So credit them.
Second, don't rename sprites (Thrash is Knux robot disguise).
Where is the Chaotix??
I smell a Naruto-cliche about to happen here with Espio.
And only the use of simple sentences make this comic uninteresting.
and the other things Flame The Hybrid said:
[quote]Um...o.k
1.) How did Chaos get out of The Master Emerald? So, that's a plot hole :P
2.) Um...if you haven't finished Sonic The Hedgehog 2006, Mephiles is...um...how sould I say this, erased from reality :P So another plot hole :P
3.) Why the hell are they yelling what they're doing? Doesn't mean that your telling the enemy what you're doing? (whatever)
4.) Damn! Chaos can sure move fast!
5.) Is Espio about to throw a physical object at Chaos? Isn't he...well, made of water?
Your score:
Your textboxes are well done, but just get rid of the colored outline, the colored words are good enough...
The placement of the sprites are good as well but in panel two, you fail to put the died robots in place.(unless they got disintegrated...)
Your spelling is o.k but in panel three...
Thrash Said:
Espio,take care of Chaos we got theses!
...That sounds a bit retarded :P
In all this is an o.k sprite comic :D So my good sir, you get...
A FOUR![/quote]
But I give you a two this time. And please take my advice, it will make your a better spriter.
Espio at 11:28AM, April 15, 2007
srry i was looking at yo pic
Flame the Hybrid at 1:25PM, April 13, 2007
@ Espio: Um...my username's Flame the Hybrid :P
Espio at 12:41PM, April 13, 2007
@Three of Chaos yea but tha espio doesnt have and punching and kicking attacks just ninja type stuff
Flame the Hybrid at 9:09AM, April 13, 2007
I really like reviewing these sprite comics. Now let's see... Well, your textboxes look kinda crappy and in my last comment I said make the outline of the boxes black not the outline [b]and[/b] the words...oh well... Your placement could be better as in the first panel Chaos's attack is going into the bridge...that looks kinda weird :P And in the last panel, where did his huge ninja star go? That right there is anothor bad placement :P And like Wes said "I smell a Naruto-cliche about to happen here with Espio." Don't do a Naruto parody if it's with Espio, it's been done to many times in the past :P So, yeah this isn't one of your best, so I'm going to have to give you anothor four :P
Espio at 5:47PM, April 12, 2007
ok but i will make a big sheet of credits when everyone comes into the story
Wes_Nero123 at 5:43PM, April 12, 2007
Muting me on the other page is not going to help anything to do with your comic.I'm just trying to help you. I said nothing offensive in my other comment and you have no reason to mute it. Once again give credit to the rippers and makers of the sprites. They spent a long time making them and they all require credit if used. So credit them. Second, don't rename sprites (Thrash is Knux robot disguise). Where is the Chaotix?? I smell a Naruto-cliche about to happen here with Espio. And only the use of simple sentences make this comic uninteresting. and the other things Flame The Hybrid said: [quote]Um...o.k 1.) How did Chaos get out of The Master Emerald? So, that's a plot hole :P 2.) Um...if you haven't finished Sonic The Hedgehog 2006, Mephiles is...um...how sould I say this, erased from reality :P So another plot hole :P 3.) Why the hell are they yelling what they're doing? Doesn't mean that your telling the enemy what you're doing? (whatever) 4.) Damn! Chaos can sure move fast! 5.) Is Espio about to throw a physical object at Chaos? Isn't he...well, made of water? Your score: Your textboxes are well done, but just get rid of the colored outline, the colored words are good enough... The placement of the sprites are good as well but in panel two, you fail to put the died robots in place.(unless they got disintegrated...) Your spelling is o.k but in panel three... Thrash Said: Espio,take care of Chaos we got theses! ...That sounds a bit retarded :P In all this is an o.k sprite comic :D So my good sir, you get... A FOUR![/quote] But I give you a two this time. And please take my advice, it will make your a better spriter.