Here's page 14 of Fusion #3, and Fusion's finding herself in a bit of trouble. Sorry for the update coming a few hours late–I've been having problems with my computer.
Wow that first panel is complex, dialogue wise. You've got the main character, fourth wall breaking narration, and you've got Bob, which is more internal dialogue, then you've got outside characters' dialogue, then you've got the main character's external dialogue! PHEW. You make it work really well though.
smkinoshita's right about the artwork. Your line work has changed a bit since the start. I love seeing artists evolve.
And I think Fusion did the right thing. Look at the damage Cpt Stupendous and Fracture did. Now what kind of damage would he do in a heated battle with Fusion? Take out the entire city?
Classic Superman-Batman dynamic between Captain Stupendous and Brooder. (Sometimes known as good/idealistic superhero, bad/scary superhero.)
And yeah, her reflection makes her turnaround in the last few pages a little easier to swallow. Thanks!
Are you doing something a little different with the art? I'm noticing something subtle with the lines. It looks like a stronger outside line than before. Also... would you be using Flash for some of the work?
Ozmandious at 1:52PM, Oct. 22, 2010
the pointed finger of justice. usually the other fingers are holding a torch, or a pitchfork...
Astalakio at 10:42AM, June 21, 2010
Wow that first panel is complex, dialogue wise. You've got the main character, fourth wall breaking narration, and you've got Bob, which is more internal dialogue, then you've got outside characters' dialogue, then you've got the main character's external dialogue! PHEW. You make it work really well though.
mind_reader at 10:33AM, June 20, 2010
Not only does The Brooder know about this, he now most likely can guess his assumptions of what went down with Pharoahmoan were correct!
Legend Comics at 10:25AM, June 19, 2010
smkinoshita's right about the artwork. Your line work has changed a bit since the start. I love seeing artists evolve. And I think Fusion did the right thing. Look at the damage Cpt Stupendous and Fracture did. Now what kind of damage would he do in a heated battle with Fusion? Take out the entire city?
Roisin Dubh at 9:16PM, June 18, 2010
He catches on quicker than most superheros. =p
Bluey at 3:36PM, June 18, 2010
Both sides have a valid point but everyone's gonna go with Sup- er... Stupendous on this one.
alschroeder at 1:52PM, June 18, 2010
Classic Superman-Batman dynamic between Captain Stupendous and Brooder. (Sometimes known as good/idealistic superhero, bad/scary superhero.) And yeah, her reflection makes her turnaround in the last few pages a little easier to swallow. Thanks!
smkinoshita at 1:36PM, June 18, 2010
Are you doing something a little different with the art? I'm noticing something subtle with the lines. It looks like a stronger outside line than before. Also... would you be using Flash for some of the work?
God of War at 11:36AM, June 18, 2010
I like how she questions herself, it proves her to be very responsible and carrying person.