I only have two crits. The clouds from the impact just don't quite work as well as they could, and in the last panel, I would have preferred a greater degree of movement from him, like he was getting struck by the blast. Otherwise, this is another top notch page and I can live with these two small things.
very nice art. However, you might consider making the left hand in the last panel smaller so it looks like it is further away from the 'camera' than the right arm and hand. The rest is very cool
bishounen1012 at 12:58AM, Feb. 4, 2009
holy camote! thats very nice drawing!
legomegacy at 6:10PM, Feb. 2, 2008
really nice freehand pencils
mrdenmac at 8:41PM, April 30, 2006
I only have two crits. The clouds from the impact just don't quite work as well as they could, and in the last panel, I would have preferred a greater degree of movement from him, like he was getting struck by the blast. Otherwise, this is another top notch page and I can live with these two small things.
carvajal at 11:10PM, April 15, 2006
At least he finished the sandwich!
Jakob at 4:40AM, April 9, 2006
Wow, that is like... just... wow!
tehladynell at 5:00PM, April 8, 2006
Sweeeeet. I like when stuff explodes.
subcultured at 12:46PM, April 8, 2006
coooooooooool
tonik at 10:35AM, April 8, 2006
very nice art. However, you might consider making the left hand in the last panel smaller so it looks like it is further away from the 'camera' than the right arm and hand. The rest is very cool
evildawn at 6:56AM, April 8, 2006
Hariku> Is that even better than "delicious"? ftsjee> Careful when you remove that hook, I hear it's more painful on the way out!
ftsjee at 1:30AM, April 8, 2006
Well, you've got me hooked. X3
Hariku at 11:33PM, April 7, 2006
I give this comic a ~Delushus~
evildawn at 10:47PM, April 7, 2006
Rich> There really is nothing like starting off a comic by blowing up a religious symbol.
Rich at 10:33PM, April 7, 2006
YESS!!! Now that is starting out with a bang!!! FAV'D!!!
evildawn at 10:14PM, April 7, 2006
shadowmaster> And more to come. I update every second day, this month on all the even days. Spread the word.
shadowmaster at 10:09PM, April 7, 2006
Duuuuuude. that is freaking awesome.