Oh wow! I thought all the language issues were stylistic!! XD They really do add a lot of character to the story, so I wouldn't worry about it too much.
Thanks dragonrider! the thing in scotland still go to to appear.
About the F word, ahahah well, Frank speaks like Ozzy Osborne :)
Sorry for my bad English, I'm certain that I must be writing wrong. My girlfriend help me with the translation.
Story line good, what happend to the Monster in Scotland? It seemed it awoke growling and looking for round two. The other comment with the repeated use of the F word suggest you raise the E to at least T+ or M.
Hugo Maximo at 10:38AM, Feb. 5, 2009
Thanks Fenn! Well, Shelley are on tiptoe! :)
Fenn at 12:37AM, Feb. 5, 2009
Is it my imagination or is Miss Shelley hovering? It's great to see another take on ol' Bolt-Neck. I like where you are going with it.
Hugo Maximo at 3:48PM, Feb. 3, 2009
English is, hmm, my second language, so I feel insecure sometimes about that, but I think that you are right! thanks again!
Fly Hue at 6:50PM, Feb. 2, 2009
Oh wow! I thought all the language issues were stylistic!! XD They really do add a lot of character to the story, so I wouldn't worry about it too much.
Hugo Maximo at 5:28PM, Feb. 1, 2009
Thanks dragonrider! the thing in scotland still go to to appear. About the F word, ahahah well, Frank speaks like Ozzy Osborne :) Sorry for my bad English, I'm certain that I must be writing wrong. My girlfriend help me with the translation.
dragonrider at 4:48PM, Feb. 1, 2009
Story line good, what happend to the Monster in Scotland? It seemed it awoke growling and looking for round two. The other comment with the repeated use of the F word suggest you raise the E to at least T+ or M.
Hugo Maximo at 2:56PM, Feb. 1, 2009
OH. Thank You!
Fly Hue at 1:15PM, Feb. 1, 2009
Jeezis this is hardcore (of course, you're probably aware of that already. ;] ) I really hope this gets a feature.