chapter 1 page 5
Darth Mongoose on Jan. 6, 2006
As you can see, in earlier pages there was a lot of mixing between pencil and pen work. you'll see this decrease later on and eventually pretty much stop. People said it was unfinished looking. I'm better at inking now than I was back when I did this.
D0m at 6:37AM, June 17, 2007
Was it a tough choice to have guns in this comic, in some form?
patrickdevine at 4:34PM, June 9, 2007
Aw, man it never ends for these guys! I like the heroine's expressionin the last panel.
Darth Mongoose at 5:52AM, Feb. 21, 2006
He has magic. He heals fast. There is a girl with postbox red hair and a sword that weighs as much as she does and you're worried about reality?
Mina_Lunga at 7:20PM, Jan. 10, 2006
I'm having problems suspending my disbelief sufficiently on this page. Armor and bullet holes I can handle. A few shots in non-visceral places, okay. Or freaky healing abilities, even. But a guy with multiple gunshot wounds in the gut chatting all friendly-like? Not buying it, not without some kind of explanation later.