Kohdok at 8:00AM, June 9, 2007

I have to agree with Mina: the last page needed a little more clarity as to who it was. It can be done by either inserting mister I-have-four-ways-of-getting-things-into-my-stomach , or a different look on the black silhouette.

Darth Mongoose at 5:55AM, Feb. 21, 2006

Nope, I've heard this problem before. The guy behind her on the previous page is the guy behind her on this page. ie. The one who isn't 6'4" and wearing a gigantic cloak.

Mina_Lunga at 7:32PM, Jan. 10, 2006

Um, did I miss a page? It goes right from dramatic poses and black to a guy whispering in her ear?