chapter 1 page 15
Darth Mongoose on Jan. 6, 2006
Drawing wise, this page was pure evil. Not only did I have to draw a hand, but I also had to do a big shot of the main heroine, plus a ‘flashback’ shot of her too! AAAGH.
Darth Mongoose on Jan. 6, 2006
Drawing wise, this page was pure evil. Not only did I have to draw a hand, but I also had to do a big shot of the main heroine, plus a ‘flashback’ shot of her too! AAAGH.
Umbrathor at 10:08AM, Aug. 19, 2022
The image-rhyme in the last two panels. Nice! HOW did this guy not recognize his crazy former classmate?
kingofsnake at 6:47AM, June 29, 2007
I love the aside in the first panel, sweating the small stuff, to me, always makes characters feel more real
Zenstrive at 3:03AM, April 21, 2007
hey, IMPROVEMENTS! Always good to see something does improve, hehehe
D 2 at 12:43AM, Dec. 30, 2006
such a cool comic
Mina_Lunga at 7:35PM, Jan. 10, 2006
Yeah, the right arm/hand in the last panel looks. . . off. Like it's someone else's hand reaching up instead of her own. Go, go, psychogirl!
Umbrathor at 10:08AM, Aug. 19, 2022
The thumb is on the wrong side of the hand, you are right.