Chapter 6 page 1
Darth Mongoose on May 21, 2008
The heavens themselves objected to me getting this page done on time. First throwing the usual random events in the way, and when that has only limited success, striking me down with a stomach bug! Still, better now and with page in hand! Yay!
I was actually going to make this page even more of a manga pastiche and put the sound effects in Japanese as well, but I'm pretty sure somebody's bound to complain just ‘cause I’ve put one line of non-plot important Japanese in the comic. Gimme a break, I have a degree in Japanese, I have to amuse myself somehow! If you really need to know, the line reads ‘omaera-!’ (oh-my-eh-raa) which best translates as ‘Oi, you lot!’ The equivalent english just wasn't as funny, appropriate or in character somehow. I say ‘in character’ because I'll be really surprised if anybody doesn't know who that is, hahahahahahahaha. It was pretty fun to make a page that's full of samurai manga clichés. If the comic wasn't set in early autumn, there would be cherry blossoms, haha.
Hmm, take a shot now if somebody hasn't read my comments, doesn't get the joke and complains in a comment about the Japanese being there in an Englis comic or that the page is clichéd….
iRock2Manga at 9:19AM, June 17, 2009
best page ive read so far mongooose! its a gag so making fun of cliches is great!thats my opnion anyway. i'm sooo jealous that u can write japanese !!!!!
chee2424 at 9:16PM, July 8, 2008
another classic by dm
patoborracho at 5:25PM, May 28, 2008
cool page and colors!!
Kxela at 8:13AM, May 27, 2008
LOL XD
blntmaker at 7:31AM, May 23, 2008
I love the third panel! The flowing material/swatch is a great touch! I hope you feel better too - Your presence around DD is sorely missed. I don't think people are reading your "How to review comics" instructions (Or maybe English is their third or fourth language). Best thoughts to you :).
crazyninny at 6:54PM, May 22, 2008
Gees, why not get a pizza and some beers? Becuase there's already a party here!
patrickdevine at 3:53PM, May 22, 2008
Well, hopefully these protagonists can speak Japanese too. Otherwise this conversation won't go anywhere
Blackmoon at 3:32PM, May 22, 2008
Good to hear you're feeling better. I like the pattern on the yukata/kimono/robe... garment in panel 4. And "omaera" is a phrase I really like the sound of... too bad I can't read kanji or I would've been able to read it myself, heh.
CZweig at 3:31PM, May 22, 2008
I was gonna be all dumb and faux-complainey about OMG THERE'S JAPANESE IN AN ENGLISH COMIC YOU POSER, but that's kind of dumb. Except I sort of did it anyway. Random dumb thing to notice, but I really like the shading on the trees in that second panel. They look very tree-ey.
Tantz_Aerine at 2:40PM, May 22, 2008
Great stuff! And stomach bugs are horrible.