Chapter 1: 011
Darth Mongoose on Nov. 14, 2009
Well this guy doesn't look villainous at all, nosiree! ^_^; (I think he needs to invest in a cloak and a curly moustache).
Hehe, sort of riffing on ‘Hellsing’ a little in the third panel there. That was fun. I actually spent a little while researching Victorian warehouses for this. It's amazing what you end up looking up while making a comic!
Oh, by the way, if you're interested in my printed comics, the new ‘Legends’ anthology from IndieManga is out now to buy from the IndieManga online shop. I drew the cover and one of the five short comics:
Check it out!
wildcard at 1:04PM, Oct. 3, 2010
Dig the character design, evilness is all about waistcoats and halfmoon specs XD
harkovast at 5:31AM, Feb. 19, 2010
The sign outside indicates they are members of the evil terrorist organisation known as "SIT"
tehwerr at 10:49AM, Dec. 19, 2009
he does got the gotee
Warsmith Bob at 2:05PM, Nov. 27, 2009
Soul patch = evil jackass. Always.
sakebento at 10:09AM, Nov. 16, 2009
Ooh, like the new guy. His glasses are snazzy. :D
Hguyver at 12:57AM, Nov. 16, 2009
It really is a cool outfit design. I like it a lot. You definitely got the evil bad-guy look down in that last panel. Very cool.
Darius Drake at 12:25AM, Nov. 16, 2009
I wonder if he's going to surrender or fight when two knights, one of them supposedly dead, show up on his doorstep.
Blackmoon at 1:34PM, Nov. 15, 2009
I love that guy's design. It looks like something I'd wear, seriously. Am I evil?
theorah at 12:12PM, Nov. 15, 2009
woah! This guy is merciless! Hey, I forgot to say what I thought of Legends, I'll say now! ^_^ I thought 'five finger discount' story had some really quirky and hilarious characters, the humour was right up my street too! I also loved your story, the artwork was perfect for the fantasy genre, clear and appealing, making it easy to get into and understand an epic story. My only crit with it was that it was too short, and there seemed like a lush story in there that totally needs to be made into a proper epic tale where time is taken to delve into the history of the characters! Honestly after I read it I really wished it could be made into a full on fantasy story!! I dont enjoy critting work, but TBH I didnt like Vitality that much. The story and main character had lots of punch/nicely written, but I think the situation shouldve been established more/given focus at the beginning, since I didnt understand until the character pointed it out that the town was under control. great work though, Legends is an awesome anthology :D
patrickdevine at 11:01AM, Nov. 15, 2009
He needs a top hat too.
tenshianna at 10:09AM, Nov. 15, 2009
I joined just to fangirl even more!
Ushio at 8:06AM, Nov. 15, 2009
Eeeevil! XD
Rydel6 at 5:03AM, Nov. 15, 2009
Someone looks a little turned on in that last panel. ^_~
ERasER at 4:12AM, Nov. 15, 2009
I don't like this guy ^^