Chapter 3: 023
Darth Mongoose on March 8, 2011
Zephyr's back!
The funny thing about this page was that originally the play on the word ‘punk’ wasn't in the dialogue, it had the mook saying something more generic like ‘gotcha’ and then Zeph appears and says ‘bang!’ or similar. The realisation that I could use the joke of him doing an irritating misquote of John Wayne and getting his comeuppance from a guy who is a punk occurred to me while I was inking it.
I don't actually write scripts for this comic. I write a synopsis of roughly what happens and what key info is put across, then thumbnail and draw, finally coming up with the exact dialogue spoken when I type it up (well, the handwritten stuff is done at the inking stage, but even that may be different from what I put in at the pencilling stage!
Umbrathor at 6:41AM, Oct. 14, 2022
Pan, pan pan! Oh, I so love t your onomatopeias.
dragonestea at 6:24PM, March 16, 2011
Green eyebrow ninja got PWNED. I just read this whole comic and all I can say is that you win. and also I would kill to be able to draw like you. hmmm, I wonder If I could draw like you if I killed you... *Googles it* it appears that this will not work and you will live to see another day. did I mention win?
Darth Xelleon at 11:21PM, March 10, 2011
Wow, this is a great comic. Don't know why I didn't know about it for so long. Oh well, it's a fave, now. ^_^
Tantz_Aerine at 5:29PM, March 10, 2011
Yay for Zephyr!
Darius Drake at 12:48PM, March 9, 2011
Finger draw attack!
wildcard at 12:24PM, March 9, 2011
Ah, the Bond villain mistake: quipping when they should be shooting. Interesting to hear about your working process, I usually do write a script but end up changing most of it when it reaches the page!