You're right, Mina. Eventually the drawings get better and you do get to see more perspective and background. I agree that the first volume strips are pretty...well..."floaty". ^^'
Thank you so much for your advice. I totally respect you as an artist and a storyteller and I'm honored that you gave my work a look!
At first I had trouble telling which characters were what sort of animals, and I though Leo was female. Thank goodness for overly developed bosoms and personal pronouns sorting that one out!
You have some good jokes, but so far the characters are just floating. Where are they? Why are two of them roommates? Why is Kyle sleeping on the kitchen floor?
It'd be nice to have some more backgrounds, and to see the characters from more than just profile and single-depth panels. Above? Below? Trapped behind a sofa?
Just my thoughts.
kitty_su at 6:40PM, Feb. 8, 2006
You're right, Mina. Eventually the drawings get better and you do get to see more perspective and background. I agree that the first volume strips are pretty...well..."floaty". ^^' Thank you so much for your advice. I totally respect you as an artist and a storyteller and I'm honored that you gave my work a look!
VinoMas at 5:38PM, Feb. 8, 2006
this is very very cute.
Mina_Lunga at 4:37PM, Feb. 8, 2006
At first I had trouble telling which characters were what sort of animals, and I though Leo was female. Thank goodness for overly developed bosoms and personal pronouns sorting that one out! You have some good jokes, but so far the characters are just floating. Where are they? Why are two of them roommates? Why is Kyle sleeping on the kitchen floor? It'd be nice to have some more backgrounds, and to see the characters from more than just profile and single-depth panels. Above? Below? Trapped behind a sofa? Just my thoughts.
kitty_su at 4:02PM, Feb. 8, 2006
You gotta love those digressions!
evadragon04 at 6:25PM, Feb. 7, 2006
oo. You could make a wallpaper with all of the chacacters colored.
FOAMY89 at 4:55PM, Feb. 7, 2006
I like it
kitty_su at 5:20AM, Feb. 7, 2006
PS, There were two updates today. This is the second. Don't miss the other one!
kitty_su at 5:20AM, Feb. 7, 2006
PS, There were two updates today. This is the second. Don't miss the other one!