Alrighty speechbubbles are fine and your using backgrounds that are not two tone and font is easy to read, well that's the good points done.
Here's the bit your not going to like... the bad points.
The writing your spelling may be right but your dialouge is dry and not very amusing. I have noticed no difference in your characters at all in terms of personality. Also it appears you have put little fore thought into your comic before starting it, that's a bad idea.
My adivice stop and think before you update again have in mind a real plot and purpose to your comic, some character personality wouldn't go astray either.
daftcrunk at 6:27PM, Dec. 5, 2010
lol cool...maaage!!
Holyknight at 9:07PM, Sept. 26, 2006
hehehe, no icecream :P
Shade at 8:51PM, Sept. 26, 2006
Alrighty speechbubbles are fine and your using backgrounds that are not two tone and font is easy to read, well that's the good points done. Here's the bit your not going to like... the bad points. The writing your spelling may be right but your dialouge is dry and not very amusing. I have noticed no difference in your characters at all in terms of personality. Also it appears you have put little fore thought into your comic before starting it, that's a bad idea. My adivice stop and think before you update again have in mind a real plot and purpose to your comic, some character personality wouldn't go astray either.
Mordechai at 8:24PM, Sept. 26, 2006
LOL!