Chapter One - Page One
MarySue on July 14, 2006
The art is not the best here, but be kind. ^^ This is my first comic, so… yes. xD It's drawn freehand with a mouse too. Sad, I know. It will get neater as time progresses, I'm just super super excited to get it going!!
Darkmax at 12:15PM, Oct. 30, 2006
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Luminous at 5:53PM, July 18, 2006
Looks good so far ^^. I'll keep an eye on this one.
Skulldog at 8:24PM, July 15, 2006
Considering it's your first, AND it was drawn with a mouse, I'm pretty impressed. My only problem is I'm having a very hard time reading the font that's not in a white box. You might want to look into adding the font last and mking sure it's very clear and readable.