Talekyn at 8:58AM, Jan. 7, 2010

I helped solve a plot point that hasn't even become a plot point yet! Three cheers for internet time travel! (See, I DO read other people's comments and your replies!) I can see Ron Jeremy played Evil Security Bishop.

freefall_drift at 7:01AM, Jan. 7, 2010

tesIII -I should finish watching Idiocracy then, only seen the first part. I wanted to make the security bishop a caricature, looks like I was successful. thanks for the feedback.

tesIII at 2:55PM, Jan. 6, 2010

kind of reminds me of idiocracy, in which the u.s. president was a wwf star who wore a giant presidential seal bling around his neck. the insincerity and overcompensation was amusing in that movie as it is on your "security bishop"

sakke at 9:28AM, Dec. 28, 2009

Port Bishop? That makes me wonder about the local ecclesiastic structure. Is the port a diocese or is he a titular bishop?

freefall_drift at 6:31AM, Dec. 23, 2009

MiHighLow. I know what you mean, I've had to go back and rework pages, because of the discussion of the pages. Or they give me an idea. From one of his comments, Talekyn helped me solve a plot point, way off in the mythical chapter 25 or so.

MeHighLow at 3:00AM, Dec. 23, 2009

Yes, it is a bitch realizing you may have missed introducing an important piece of info, or that there could have been an earlier cue in a dialogue about something, or some kind of reply or situation that develops characters... Well, storytelling is fluid, as the story grows in length, it grows in scope, so I find it natural to go back and rework stuff in the light of new ideas that came to me after I develop the story further. So, in a nutshell, try to avoid this, but if it adds to the story and your satisfaction with it - hey, it's the internet! No holds barred (except Hitler comparisons. That shit is off limits).

Talekyn at 8:55PM, Dec. 21, 2009

Second tier looks good!

freefall_drift at 10:47AM, Dec. 18, 2009

Next row is about done. Expect an update on Monday.

freefall_drift at 6:55AM, Dec. 15, 2009

@Talekyn, to be honest, it didn't occur to me at first. I've got a lot to learn about storytelling. Luckily with the web, I can backfill and rework as needed.

freefall_drift at 6:52AM, Dec. 15, 2009

@ Azerisii - Thanks. Hope you enjoy the extra pages. The internet says, so it may be true that "Michael Moore conducted an experiment once, having a weird-looking guy arrive in a quiet street, change his house number to 666, operate chainsaws at night, carry machetes and billhooks around and leave bloodstained bedding for the garbage man. Nobody reported him."

Talekyn at 7:50PM, Dec. 14, 2009

Glad I saw the note that you'd updated. I sort of thought this conversation had just happened off panel. Okay, who am I kidding? It never even occured to me that Ruun should ask Dante what's with the being chased by Proctors while not wearing a breather. I was just that caught up in the story that I accepted it at face value and assumed Ruun did too!

Azerisii at 3:13PM, Dec. 14, 2009

But if he doesn't go into the basement, how will he know what made all those noises? Oo I am liking the retrospective. This is a good add, I'll keep watching for the rest :3

freefall_drift at 11:46AM, Dec. 14, 2009

In my head, it was the principle of "the enemy of my enemy is my friend". So if the proctors are chasing him, he can't be all bad.

freefall_drift at 11:44AM, Dec. 14, 2009

In keeping with the B grade horror movie genre, Ruun's safe so long as he doesn't go into the basement.

I am Candyman at 11:15AM, Dec. 14, 2009

Oh not just a murderer, but an axe murderer. Now that adds some danger.

freefall_drift at 10:45AM, Dec. 14, 2009

It would really change the mood of the story if Captain Dante was an axe murder and THATs why he was on the run from the law.

sakke at 10:30AM, Dec. 14, 2009

Now he asks;)