01-10 Flashback part 2
freefall_drift on Jan. 9, 2010
After I finished Chapter 1, I found I needed to to add a couple of pages.
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I had fun on the old guy's face on panel 2.
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Second row.
I hate Dante's face in the the 5th panel but I cannot get it better than that. It will have to do.
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Third row.
This dialogue changed a bit after I saw an interesting show about the history of sex. The last panel's words changed after the part about the roman noblemen. A commentator described it as “The Men have no holes.”
freefall_drift at 2:42PM, Jan. 22, 2010
Now it's back. Weird.
freefall_drift at 6:21AM, Jan. 22, 2010
Very odd, the graphic reverted to one from two weeks back, yet I have all my comments. Must have had a server crash or something. Will re upload the current version tonight.
freefall_drift at 8:19PM, Jan. 21, 2010
Well, all I can say is that we will find out on the next page.
Talekyn at 1:36PM, Jan. 21, 2010
Dante's definitely got the upper hand now. I'm guessing he's a top ... *grin*
freefall_drift at 10:58AM, Jan. 18, 2010
What I'm trying to get illustrate is that the security bishop is a tin pot dictator thug, used to getting his way, because people are scared of his office. Dante doesn't care, so the Captain is going to manipulate him, keep him off balance, for every advantage he can get. --- I didn't consciously think about the bishop sitting down, and the disadvantage it puts him in. I imagined him as an oily bully who sits back and threatens, and is so feared, he doesn't have to exert himself. He's not used to it not working.
Talekyn at 10:23AM, Jan. 18, 2010
You may not like the way Dante's face came out in panel 5, but the physical dynamic between the characters is great -- Dante calm even though he's in cuffs, the Bishop at a disadvantage because he's sitting and has to gesture up to make his point.
cyberdog at 10:54PM, Jan. 15, 2010
Cool page.
freefall_drift at 10:30AM, Jan. 12, 2010
I wanted to make him seem like a complete egomaniac.
Talekyn at 9:04AM, Jan. 12, 2010
I love how he keeps referring to it as "my ship" even though he doesn't actually have it yet.
sakke at 5:22AM, Jan. 10, 2010
Ah, he wants to be Caliph instead of the Caliph! :D