Mr Mustard Seed at 5:33AM, Dec. 11, 2006

the new look works much better. Good job!

silas at 12:48AM, Dec. 11, 2006

Thank you for the critiques and comments. I've updated this page by spending more time on the last panel. Subcultured please let me know what you think about this version. I tried to keep the painting style more consistent. I actually painted it in color ,but b+w seemed more serious on that panel. --Silas

Green_Tangerine at 3:26PM, Dec. 9, 2006

Wow, this looks fantastic in color. really great.

Mr Mustard Seed at 11:35PM, Dec. 8, 2006

I can't wait to find out more about the connections you're laying the groundwork for; kid's b.g., Laura's involvement, where the killer is, what he will do. Post soon, Silas.

silas at 9:09AM, Dec. 8, 2006

Xaam! Thank you. :-) subcultured, I was experimenting with the background on the last panel. I'm still fine tunning my art style. I'll try to keep it more consistent with the first 3 panels. Thank you everyone for the critiques and comments. You're helping me refine my approach. --Silas

subcultured at 6:23AM, Dec. 8, 2006

i dig the colorin on the 1st 3 panels

Xaam at 3:18AM, Dec. 8, 2006

I love your style. It's very distinct. It remind me of watercolors almost. Run kid run! Great movement. Love the waiter's expression in panel two. Can't wait for more