Sir_Ryan at 4:18PM, July 18, 2007

Interesting comic. Your art isn't fully there but with time and patcience it will improve dramaticly. I recoment that you google a few images to help you with your body structure and anatomy, also i noticed that you use the MANGA style, here is a GREAT! link to help you, and its totally free!!! http://www.cablenet.ne.jp/~japanime/tutorial/tutorial.html But keep up the good work, and i look forward to reading the rest of the comic as it unfolds. 5 stars ***** Sir_Ryan