Man, the colors here look GREAT--love the shading. (I think this has been my favorite page so far.) *but I've got like ten more to go through, so there'll be plenty more chances to blow my mind* Like this page, for some reason, did. ^,^
Took a look through it, strong start so far. Good art style and some nice coloring.
BUT
Dude! Look at panel 2 on this page compared to all the others in the pages you've submitted so far. It's so detailed it almost feels completely out of place! Hahah I'd love to see many of the other panels with that level of a attention to detail.
One more recommendation: It's raining but things don't look wet! As a suggestion, some subtle reflections and/or damp details on the clothes / skin would help the immersive factor. Also, there's a continuity issue on page 6 -- it suddenly stops raining!
I'm gonna fav this because I'm interested to see where you go with it.
Chameleon Kid at 1:19AM, March 17, 2009
Man, the colors here look GREAT--love the shading. (I think this has been my favorite page so far.) *but I've got like ten more to go through, so there'll be plenty more chances to blow my mind* Like this page, for some reason, did. ^,^
opin74 at 7:10PM, Jan. 27, 2009
great work, loved the effects, definitely a fav
fox orian at 1:37AM, Dec. 1, 2008
Took a look through it, strong start so far. Good art style and some nice coloring. BUT Dude! Look at panel 2 on this page compared to all the others in the pages you've submitted so far. It's so detailed it almost feels completely out of place! Hahah I'd love to see many of the other panels with that level of a attention to detail. One more recommendation: It's raining but things don't look wet! As a suggestion, some subtle reflections and/or damp details on the clothes / skin would help the immersive factor. Also, there's a continuity issue on page 6 -- it suddenly stops raining! I'm gonna fav this because I'm interested to see where you go with it.