I would think about changing "People of Terai doesn't start till late evening." It doesn't sound right and it is a tad confusing. "People of Terai don't start till late evening," sounds better but it is still confusing. What do they start?
Hope it is okay to give helpful advice.
TheFlyingGreenMonkey at 4:47AM, Jan. 1, 2010
I would think about changing "People of Terai doesn't start till late evening." It doesn't sound right and it is a tad confusing. "People of Terai don't start till late evening," sounds better but it is still confusing. What do they start? Hope it is okay to give helpful advice.