Ben's Book of Banned Beasts- Page 1
hpkomic on July 21, 2007
From my site:
Oh ho, welcome to the first page of Ben�s Book of Banned Beasts!
Before we get too far in, the format of the first three pages jumps around, and I�ll explain the reason for each as we get to them, but things start sticking to the same format around page 4, which coincidentally is a bit of a hint as to what GHS�s future format is going to be (not right away into the next storyline, there are at least ten pages of that I just did my standard way). Did you get all that? D:
Anyway, an introduction here, this is my comic that I am pitching for the Comic Book Challenge. While this story won�t even appear in print, I figure it would be a good comic to grease some wheels with, because the online audience gets to vote in which comics make it. So this is just a taste of what you�ll get in a print volume.
And yes, the title is �Caw-tion. Falling Objects�, it�s a terrible pun and I love it.
Also, as for the chicken, you may or may not of heard of the Aitvaras? I did have to change a couple things to get the Aitvaras to work in my story, but I think you�ll understand why when we get to it.
Part of the reason Ben�s Book of Banned Beasts would be so fun is the fact I can pull out all these obscure bits of folklore and it can be somewhat educational.
So, first page of Ben�s Book of Banned Beasts is posted, let me know your thoughts.
EDIT: pparently DD won't display my auto-updates. That's a good way to isolate and lose your users. So I went ahead and uploaded it manually.
DOUBLE EDIT[/b}: I guess I am up for a drunk duck award for best sci-fi comic, how did that happen? You can vote here.
FyreHyde at 7:12PM, Oct. 8, 2007
Rejected Pokemon #366 : Burncock - Inbred rooster on fire. Has the attacks "Duh" and "Burnies"
7384395948urhfdjfrueruieieueue at 4:41PM, Aug. 22, 2007
Flaming cocktail, right?
spambot at 8:43AM, July 25, 2007
So far so good. I really like your style.
Kota at 4:06PM, July 23, 2007
How did I not comment on this?! Anyway, love the Aitvaras
dgriff13 at 2:35PM, July 23, 2007
what a rude awakening...
Ersatz at 9:33AM, July 23, 2007
I like it! Keep it coming!
Ozoneocean at 6:26PM, July 22, 2007
Groovy, I like the concept HPK. I'll be rooting for ya!
Cheeko at 3:20PM, July 22, 2007
Hahahaha! You're off to a wonderful start, HP! I already can't wait to see more. :D
crazyduck at 11:03AM, July 22, 2007
Awesome. Good job, as always.
Allan at 10:52AM, July 22, 2007
Wow! I really like the way that car/house looks in the first panel! Way to go, hpkomic!
artdude2002 at 10:24AM, July 22, 2007
Wow! A fire... breathing chicken.
madscott at 9:19AM, July 22, 2007
DD has a bug that's not showing anyones queued updates. Sucks for everyone who likes to sleep in.
oneminutecomics at 8:38AM, July 22, 2007
Such a nice scene, well built opening.