Wow, George. That was more in depth than an entire episode of Boobah. Oh well, I guess you can't please everybody. Though you might like the one with the beaver a few pages back.
This isn't really a joke as much as an observation, unless you count the acid comment. I don't really think it presents the observation in an interesting manner, which would be, you know, what you're trying to do.
Not saying that it should be "funny" or anything, but it should at least be something other than "this is what I'm talking about" and then... nothing, really.
Artistically, the composition of the third/fourth panels are odd. I can definitely get behind cropping, and I think it works with the dog, but Gene's bill doesn't need to be that far off the panel. It pulls the eye too much to that point, which is counterintuitive to the flow of this particular comic.
You're not the only one I've heard say that! And when you read the musical notes it turns out to be a somewhat creepy song when mixed with the characters expressions! it's like evil carnival music!
As always, awesome inks and colors too!
i hate PBS... i get two channels, and I can't stand arthur being on what seems like 8 times a day. and then after arther is a terrible show called maya and miguel.
FyreHyde at 11:57AM, Oct. 2, 2007
wtf is boobah?
zammap at 8:32PM, Feb. 12, 2006
Not... Boohba!!!
Randal at 4:10AM, Jan. 19, 2006
Wow, George. That was more in depth than an entire episode of Boobah. Oh well, I guess you can't please everybody. Though you might like the one with the beaver a few pages back.
radarig at 8:05PM, Jan. 18, 2006
This isn't really a joke as much as an observation, unless you count the acid comment. I don't really think it presents the observation in an interesting manner, which would be, you know, what you're trying to do. Not saying that it should be "funny" or anything, but it should at least be something other than "this is what I'm talking about" and then... nothing, really. Artistically, the composition of the third/fourth panels are odd. I can definitely get behind cropping, and I think it works with the dog, but Gene's bill doesn't need to be that far off the panel. It pulls the eye too much to that point, which is counterintuitive to the flow of this particular comic.
Puff at 3:44PM, Jan. 18, 2006
You're not the only one I've heard say that! And when you read the musical notes it turns out to be a somewhat creepy song when mixed with the characters expressions! it's like evil carnival music! As always, awesome inks and colors too!
sir jingo at 1:24PM, Jan. 18, 2006
i hate PBS... i get two channels, and I can't stand arthur being on what seems like 8 times a day. and then after arther is a terrible show called maya and miguel.
elenawing at 12:52PM, Jan. 18, 2006
hehe this is great! by the way, thanks for the advice for my comic. the comics shall soon be stacked instead of side scrolling ^-^
wolfgang at 5:50PM, Jan. 17, 2006
i came, i read, i liked.. hahaha.. good comic u got there
Ozoneocean at 7:09AM, Jan. 17, 2006
You need to get these published. Great art!
coinilius at 5:59AM, Jan. 17, 2006
Olde time laughter *chorttle chorttle* Really like the new comics, Randal!
T_K at 9:58PM, Jan. 16, 2006
.... DRUGS!
Green_Tangerine at 9:22PM, Jan. 16, 2006
hehe