Future
Elanor Pam on Nov. 20, 2006
She just doesn't know whether she should act as a good girl or bad girl. Thus, he tunes her stupid garbling out and reduces her to a cleavage. Lesson of the day: if you don't have anything to talk about, use a t-shirt.
There's a lot more I'd like to say about Raphael's dreams, but since I don't think I'll have an oportunity to add it to the comic any soon, I'll write a little bit of it here: Raffy likes legends and myths, and would like to be a fantasy writer. His favorite author is, unsurprisingly, Tolkien. His volleyball teammates all think he's a nerd.
And since two people have brought it up so far - the speech bubbles are thick like that because, if I used the same brush for everything, they'd be difficult to separate from the rest of the lineart (since the lineart is light and pencilled). Since I draw the bubbles along with the lineart itself, that made it troublesome for me during coloring, and uncomfortable in the eyes while reading.
I decided in a fit of jenyuz to draw the bubbles with a thick brush in high pressure, and make them really stand out - call it a stylistic choice - but it's obviously not working out. OC's brushes are also very sensitive, and there's no “smooth out” tool or option in it, so they come out a bit shaky. I guess I'll thin them up a bit from now on and see if it works better… though they'll stay this way till page 16, since they just need coloring.
dueeast at 6:15PM, May 11, 2008
So her eyes [i]were[/i] starting to glaze over-! Drat.
Asmodai at 5:07AM, June 1, 2007
I'm giving this a 5 just because of that Dog pee puddle analogy.
Tatsu at 2:16PM, Dec. 20, 2006
heh.. 'shallower than a puddle of dog-pee' i laughed out loud when i read that..XD. great comic too. i really like the water color look to it (^^)
VegaX at 10:49AM, Nov. 22, 2006
My comment on the speechballons was that they could be done better. The art is so soft and good looking while the ballons look like something you made REALLY quick. They arn't round and the lines sometimes miss eachother like in the last panel.
The mediocre one at 1:11PM, Nov. 21, 2006
Rockzors my sockzors.
Tantz_Aerine at 7:00AM, Nov. 21, 2006
very interesting- it is starting to pick up, isn't it?
Deku_stick at 5:28AM, Nov. 21, 2006
i kinda like it ...