[chapter 1] page 4

gabbie on Aug. 5, 2007

Who? WHO??!?!?!?

You'll find out later. A lot later. It's not important for the moment but I felt it was important to imply his presence early on.

The backgrounds are looking extra awful in this page, I notice! The storytelling is a bit of a flop, too :/ However! What do people think of the slightly-cleaner lines? Better? Worse?