#0 Page 12 - Trickery...
spunkbrat on April 21, 2008
A little late this page but,
I was trying out some new paper, a thicker art card at about 130gsm which seems to hold the pencil work much better and doesn't wobble that much with repeated erasing.
Anyway I got a bit excited and skipped ahead and penciled pages 14 & 15. Still 13 to get done and more colouring…
Chromium Dreams at 1:02AM, April 27, 2008
I think one would have to be a nutbar to think he'd be resentful of mom, but this Does clear the controversy. Nicely put
spunkbrat at 10:27PM, April 24, 2008
Okay, I edited the text a little, thought I'd keep it simple maintaining that secret wish and hopefully removing any snide resentments of his mom... Ctrl+F5 to refresh the page yah!
Chromium Dreams at 12:47AM, April 23, 2008
Yeah, I can see too; but really, it sounds more like a wish.... at least in my opinion.
CoyoteLongshot at 8:09PM, April 22, 2008
He didn't seem resentful to me... but I guess I can see how someone could take it that way.
spunkbrat at 5:20PM, April 22, 2008
Hmmm... I was reading back and thought the tone of the last panel is not that spot on, and wonder if he came across as being resentful of his mother... which is not intended. I'll give it a few days and see if I need to re-script that bit.
Orange at 4:03PM, April 22, 2008
Awesome :D!
Fly Hue at 3:51PM, April 22, 2008
"not turning stone to flesh." That line tears me to pieces.
Insizwa at 12:48PM, April 22, 2008
Very cool page.
dueeast at 11:06AM, April 22, 2008
Me too! The smile is infectious and the sentiment and mood created are great. Very pretty and well drawn.
TheMidge28 at 10:23AM, April 22, 2008
ditto DAJB! absolutely lovely.
DAJB at 9:18AM, April 22, 2008
Gorgeous as always. And nice to see a smile on our stone man, too!