Payback....
Bluesox on March 24, 2010
Sorry about the sloppiness… I split my finger open and it hasn't healed all the way yet.. >_< …. Ok, so I think I should explain what Luelon is doing..
In the first panel he's dodging him, then next he spins around *jumping behind him* , then last, after he jumps behind him slashing him with his sword.. last panel the guy *name hidden until further notice* in on the ground in pain…
Anyway… Pls comment.. I need pointers.. Any ideas on how I can make it look better? I promise I'm getting a better sytem for this comic soon…
InkWovenHeart at 3:44PM, April 3, 2010
AAH!! I can't draw people small, unless it's like an aerial view.. Cuz then they're just smudges cuz you're so high up..
rainbow1 at 9:44AM, April 1, 2010
colory slashs PRETTY O,O
Bluesox at 8:54PM, March 26, 2010
Haha, thanks. I've been meaning to do that, but thanks for pointing it out. It's drawing ppl small is what gets me.
Janen at 2:50PM, March 25, 2010
Not that I want to sound like the typical nice guy, but I actually like your style, it is the reason why I fav the comic. Even if it's in pencils it is very clean. I would only recommend getting a view of the setting every once in a while or an action shot that shows both the characters and the setting from a wider perspective. Cheers and good work.