i'm sorry, but the computerlanguage is a bit... i don't know... you should write you know, proper english :P
it's really good :D i Can't wait till the next update :D
It's good. I like it. But can barely tell where to go from the first panel. Try making the page flow. Make it easy for the reader to know where to go next. That way the story flows and comes out better. ^_^ Keep it up!
ingrid_nini at 3:12PM, Dec. 23, 2006
lol XD "hotness" hahaha I laughed a while XD lol
Kjafs at 1:49PM, Dec. 8, 2006
i'm sorry, but the computerlanguage is a bit... i don't know... you should write you know, proper english :P it's really good :D i Can't wait till the next update :D
mihotohya at 12:12PM, Dec. 2, 2006
It's good. I like it. But can barely tell where to go from the first panel. Try making the page flow. Make it easy for the reader to know where to go next. That way the story flows and comes out better. ^_^ Keep it up!
gpcrocker at 12:23PM, Dec. 1, 2006
i like
Kiji at 11:56AM, Dec. 1, 2006
love the art but can barely see it .... try inking it with a pen so i can see it better!!!! :)