This is a huge improvement. You aren't bitch slapping the fourth wall, and your text isn't colored.
I have always liked the idea of color coding the bubble's outlines since it doesn't affect the readability of the text. It's a good tradeoff.
All in all, it looks like you are genuinely trying to improve, and that means a lot.
becca9901 at 6:30PM, Feb. 5, 2008
Hay can i have a cameo of your sprite please?
Rich at 9:58PM, Sept. 16, 2006
This is a huge improvement. You aren't bitch slapping the fourth wall, and your text isn't colored. I have always liked the idea of color coding the bubble's outlines since it doesn't affect the readability of the text. It's a good tradeoff. All in all, it looks like you are genuinely trying to improve, and that means a lot.
Scorchgofer at 9:55PM, Sept. 16, 2006
She... CAUGHT... Sonic... This is gonna be good...