Hey, I'm introducing a new female character, that's right folks!
Here's her first sketch (she's a motor biker). Do you like her? Maybe you can help me design her, what would you add/change? I take name suggestions…
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collar should be higher.
umm her face needs... prolly a serious look to begin with so you can amp it up with goofyness later.
now it just looks stupid.
casue as its a concept youd think shes always gonna look like that and i dont think thats the case.. or if it is then you SHould really consider redoing that face.
i dont know what kind of charater she is tho.
but with Sexy bitches slimmer eyes usually gets that sexy spark across.
but with cutesy girls you get those eyes.
well yeah thas it good job hope she ill enter soon.
Thanks, guys! :)
I've been a little absent lately. I'm in the process of shading all my previous pages so they will all look like that. Sorry for the long wait, but I want to get this done before I continue the story. Thanks for sticking around, I really appreciate it!
she's very cool.. and my suggestions fall in line with everyone elses'.. the cyclops hair thing.. the facial features didn't strike me, etc.
maybe she should wear sunglasses?
Btw, I'm in the process of shading all previous pages, so in a couple of days I'll be updating them starting from the newest page if you care to see. I think they look 200% better :)
Thanks for the suggestions, guys!
WOW, Tweebus! you're the man. Great drawing! the funny thing is that I made her like that with the knee protectors before I added those panty things :)
I'm not sure about the hat though, do you people like it?
Everything works except the facial features.
The face is too rounded near the chin. Lips too
high and the eye too manga.
The figure & outfit though is a knock out!
Ozoneocean at 11:39PM, Oct. 20, 2007
I DO like her. She's quite nice and very welcome!
Mistchiff at 5:43AM, Oct. 18, 2007
collar should be higher. umm her face needs... prolly a serious look to begin with so you can amp it up with goofyness later. now it just looks stupid. casue as its a concept youd think shes always gonna look like that and i dont think thats the case.. or if it is then you SHould really consider redoing that face. i dont know what kind of charater she is tho. but with Sexy bitches slimmer eyes usually gets that sexy spark across. but with cutesy girls you get those eyes. well yeah thas it good job hope she ill enter soon.
Zheror at 4:44PM, Oct. 7, 2007
Olivia.
QSAMA at 3:51PM, Oct. 1, 2007
yes i love her!!
FAL at 11:10AM, Sept. 26, 2007
Thanks, guys! :) I've been a little absent lately. I'm in the process of shading all my previous pages so they will all look like that. Sorry for the long wait, but I want to get this done before I continue the story. Thanks for sticking around, I really appreciate it!
tweebus at 8:48AM, Sept. 26, 2007
dittos! That award presentation you did blew me away! You should get an award just for that. Simply genius!
dgriff13 at 8:40PM, Sept. 25, 2007
Just stopped by to lavish you with compliments over the work you did for the DD awards presentation. Great job!
qdawg at 1:41PM, Sept. 16, 2007
Definately sunglasses maybe aviators. And Candace is a good name.
man in black at 3:36PM, Sept. 10, 2007
looks great
tweebus at 5:03AM, Sept. 10, 2007
The hat is a bit much, she is already quite tall. How about a night stick? You know... in case boy's get naughty!
dgriff13 at 7:14PM, Sept. 9, 2007
she's very cool.. and my suggestions fall in line with everyone elses'.. the cyclops hair thing.. the facial features didn't strike me, etc. maybe she should wear sunglasses?
Inidas at 6:09PM, Sept. 9, 2007
I like Tweebus's leg guards better, but not the hat. And her name is Candace.
JillyFoo at 5:18PM, Sept. 9, 2007
All comics are better with a chick in it.
FAL at 4:11PM, Sept. 9, 2007
Btw, I'm in the process of shading all previous pages, so in a couple of days I'll be updating them starting from the newest page if you care to see. I think they look 200% better :)
FAL at 4:05PM, Sept. 9, 2007
Thanks for the suggestions, guys! WOW, Tweebus! you're the man. Great drawing! the funny thing is that I made her like that with the knee protectors before I added those panty things :) I'm not sure about the hat though, do you people like it?
tweebus at 3:53PM, Sept. 9, 2007
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tweebus at 2:31PM, Sept. 9, 2007
yeah, some Weapon Zero Harley boots where the leather comes up jus below the knees. and n air force hat... the ones simular to a cop's full brim.
Argent_Nightmare at 11:21AM, Sept. 9, 2007
Lose the heels, maybe? I'd imagine it's hard to ride a motorbike with them.
tweebus at 10:29AM, Sept. 9, 2007
Everything works except the facial features. The face is too rounded near the chin. Lips too high and the eye too manga. The figure & outfit though is a knock out!
Woif at 10:18AM, Sept. 9, 2007
She looks nice. I say she will fit in fine.
Avalon comics at 9:01AM, Sept. 9, 2007
8D
FAL at 8:35AM, Sept. 9, 2007
Thanks for the suggetion! No cyclopse face: check.
mindcat at 8:34AM, Sept. 9, 2007
yes nice boots!
lothar at 8:29AM, Sept. 9, 2007
Yes! but, since you asked , i would change her hair , the cyclopse thing drives me insane !!!