Sorry, this is not a new page. I took some time to work on my shading since I received good feedback for it. Now I'm actually happy with the results so I uploaded all the updated pages for Chapter 3. Now I'll continue the story while updating old pages also.
You'll also notice Tony's new look, people didn't like the exaggerated spikey hair so I've changed that!
Hope you like the changes, and thanks for sticking around!
i personally think That if someone wants the bluelines back they are bitches. and idiots
the black lines are so EASIER to look at and the blue lines i never understood why you used bluelines it melts with the white making it hard to decifer.
I think The comic actually looks like the awesomest comic now.
keep this up its SO MUCh better.
but story wise at this stage is going pretty slow in where you want to go with this.
it isent really clear, its like bill and teds excellent adventures right now.
go do something back in time, get back to normal and rock.
will we see a story progression wich will alter characters or so?
i love this comic i really do its just that where in chapter 3.
and even tho stuff has happened. nothing has happened.
it feels like chapter 3 of STSO i did.
lots of shit happened but nothing happened.
and thats kinda how i feel of these 3 chapters.
but i trust youll get your ass into gear and whip something meaning full out in your story.
just heads up this is what i think.
and dont get me wrong i love me some COMEDY.
but these characters dont have no clock to race against, nothing pulling em down, they are just generally funny characters but IMO that isent enough.
it needs A secondary force whether you will supply it later or so is great but hurry the fuck up.
FAL at 7:29PM, Jan. 4, 2008
Yes, I'm coming back! I'm not dead yet... just had to take a looong break! I'm working on the next page while I type this so the story will continue!
silentkitty at 6:26AM, Jan. 2, 2008
FALLLLLLLL... Are you ever coming back? :( I miss this comic.
mindcat at 3:58PM, Nov. 17, 2007
i liked the blue, but this is even better
Brogan at 7:18PM, Nov. 9, 2007
nice.
Ozoneocean at 11:48PM, Oct. 20, 2007
I love how it's going, keep it up man!
Mistchiff at 5:38AM, Oct. 18, 2007
i personally think That if someone wants the bluelines back they are bitches. and idiots the black lines are so EASIER to look at and the blue lines i never understood why you used bluelines it melts with the white making it hard to decifer. I think The comic actually looks like the awesomest comic now. keep this up its SO MUCh better. but story wise at this stage is going pretty slow in where you want to go with this. it isent really clear, its like bill and teds excellent adventures right now. go do something back in time, get back to normal and rock. will we see a story progression wich will alter characters or so? i love this comic i really do its just that where in chapter 3. and even tho stuff has happened. nothing has happened. it feels like chapter 3 of STSO i did. lots of shit happened but nothing happened. and thats kinda how i feel of these 3 chapters. but i trust youll get your ass into gear and whip something meaning full out in your story. just heads up this is what i think. and dont get me wrong i love me some COMEDY. but these characters dont have no clock to race against, nothing pulling em down, they are just generally funny characters but IMO that isent enough. it needs A secondary force whether you will supply it later or so is great but hurry the fuck up.
angel of music at 6:56PM, Oct. 9, 2007
You defintally did lots of work on the shading, but personally, I don't really like it. It looks nice and all, but the blue lineart was cool.
JillyFoo at 9:33PM, Oct. 7, 2007
So weird with black hair. Take some getting used to.
Conned at 3:10PM, Oct. 7, 2007
That guy is..intense hahah
Janen at 1:23PM, Oct. 7, 2007
I did look, he looked very serious about it.
D0m at 1:15PM, Oct. 7, 2007
Still a cool filler. Haha
silentkitty at 10:47AM, Oct. 7, 2007
The updated pages look awesome, Fal! I agree, I'm totally looking forward to seeing how the new pages come out. Keep it up! :]
tweebus at 10:08AM, Oct. 7, 2007
Fantazmo FAL! The darker lines and the shading add tremendous depth. Also, waiting... to see what's up with these guys?!!
dgriff13 at 10:02AM, Oct. 7, 2007
kudos to you for being determined to improve your artwork! It just keeps getting better! Looking forward to more update ;0D
Painerz at 9:28AM, Oct. 7, 2007
I can't wait to check out your new stuff! Keep up the awesome work! :D