No thank you?
honey bucket on Nov. 13, 2008
Comments/criticism would be awesome! Spread the love :D
This is pretty much my first fight scene to ever draw so it's not that great. It was…daunting for me to draw too? So I kept putting it off…but I did it :0 So dumb to plan a fight within the first 10 pages…
Expect the regular update on Sunday :D I have a speech meet tomorrow (wish me luck D:) but I'll get it done…
Ochitsukanai at 4:41PM, Dec. 21, 2008
I like the body position of that guy in panel two. He's quite proportionate!
Mushroomcomix at 11:15AM, Nov. 17, 2008
your fight scene is much better then any I have ever done..I try to avoid them until i can draw them better..Practice practice practice ;)
Aghammer at 7:28PM, Nov. 16, 2008
fight scenes are a pain.. I have several coming up. foreshortening is also difficult as in the second panel. The panel where she is pushing the guy down is very good. I love your color choices and the line work my friend... very nice.
honey bucket at 7:13PM, Nov. 16, 2008
Thanks, both of you. I will add more detail..and now that I look at the last panel, I think I will redo it to make it look less stiff
harkovast at 7:41AM, Nov. 16, 2008
I think the characters could do with being a bit more distinct. The complete lack of detail, while interesting, makes them look very bland.
RushtonCygnus at 9:20PM, Nov. 14, 2008
Since you asked, I think you did a good job on the panels where she's jumping him. I think she looks a little stiff as she's throwing that punch, like you could have added more motion in her body. ... But a good comic overall. Good luck with your speech and the rest of the day.