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Abt_Nihil on Aug. 1, 2010
Seb: Once again, ‘wordily’ establishing a lot in a small space. I really enjoyed writing the dialogue for the Ancient. Will we see more of Clockwork and what becomes of him after his mentor's death? If I'm assigned to write again in this or any future season, you can bet that I'm going to push for it. ;) Abt: Again, I don't clearly remember which parts I wrote here, but I think I wrote the news report part about Watchman's death, and also Clockwork's & Change's lines. For Change, the only good bomb is a detonated bomb… In any case, this was one of the pages I was most involved in, I think. For this chapter, I think I pretty much wrote the first two and the last two pages, and the middle section was a rough description which I left for Sebastian to work out ^_^ (and, as he said, he wrote The Ancient's dialogue here). Also, I love how fukujinzuke visualized this scene. Fun fact: Watchman's death is a bit of a homage to what happens to Montblanc, the swiss robot hero in Naoki Urasawa's retelling of the classic “The Greatest Robot On Earth” storyline from Astro Boy (or Tetsuwan Atom). I recommend getting the manga called “Pluto”. Artwork on this page by fukujinzuke . Thanks for reading and commenting!
irrevenant at 6:34AM, May 22, 2012
I remember that Astroboy storyline. I'm... not actually sure how this is even vaguely analogous.
Ozmandious at 8:54AM, Sept. 2, 2010
who's the freaky looking dude in the background?
fukujinzuke at 11:36AM, Aug. 3, 2010
Thanks, Wes! Looking back, I probably should have incorporated more details on the background room. Probably would've only taken another 30 minutes. Next time, gadget... next time...
Sebastian_Sandberg at 7:23PM, Aug. 2, 2010
Al: Like Abt said, it was not supposed to be a big death. The Watchman was just another tragic bystander that fell victim to the Ancient's machinations. I can safely say though, that whatever plans Abt has for the death, it's not going to be touched upon further in HA #1 and #2.
Wes_Nero123 at 6:23PM, Aug. 2, 2010
Fuku's drawing style astounds me sometimes....Its so simple, yet so. damn. GOOD.
Abt_Nihil at 4:04PM, Aug. 2, 2010
Al: There are some more words to say on this topic, so I created a [url=http://www.drunkduck.com/community/view_topic.php?tid=54150&cid=4698&comic_id=37740]forum thread here[/url].
alschroeder at 3:45PM, Aug. 2, 2010
Fair enough. You know the ending and I don't. Just thought it seemed a little odd, but we'll see if there's a method to your madness.
Abt_Nihil at 3:28PM, Aug. 2, 2010
sux: I agree a 100%! :D
LuchaCoffee at 3:24PM, Aug. 2, 2010
Abt: You kidding, who doesn't love Astro Boy, he was cool and the robots themselves were amazing and you felt for them so much :)
Abt_Nihil at 3:21PM, Aug. 2, 2010
sux: You read it? High five! :D Al: The point is, it's NOT a "big dramatic death". (In case it was the ad on HU which made you think that, I apologize. That was a joke - a parody of similar advertisements for "big dramatic" comic book deaths.) And you're right, Watchmen has never even been mentioned before. I won't explain myself, as all of these things have been planned in a larger context. So my remark that it's not supposed to be a ""big dramatic death" to begin with must suffice for now. DAJB: That'll teach you for just going away like that! Um, welcome back, I mean :3
DAJB at 7:47AM, Aug. 2, 2010
Wha- ?! I go away for a week and you start killing people already? Damn. Lucky I wasn't away longer; it'd have been the end of the world!
alschroeder at 7:40AM, Aug. 2, 2010
Don't get me wrong: I've been enjoying the story up till now, and you might have some big reason for not revealing Watchman till after he's blown to bits. And maybe he was introduced somewhere and I missed it. (I went back and reread the story twice, to try to make sure.) But... Dramatically... Just for me... It kinds of misses the target.
alschroeder at 7:24AM, Aug. 2, 2010
Wait. What? The big dramatic death is someone we haven't SEEN before? Just a suggestion: it would have been better to have SEEN Watchman, and THEN blown him up. Unless you're going to do a LOT of backstory, like Comedian in...well...Watchmen.
AzuJOD at 5:30AM, Aug. 2, 2010
That was quite a clever plan.
Hero at 5:03AM, Aug. 2, 2010
And, the bad guys make the scene.
LuchaCoffee at 10:05PM, Aug. 1, 2010
that was an awesome death for Montblanc, and You will never be forgotten Watchman *salutes him*