Out of the Loop
adobedragon on June 13, 2007
There are two errors on this page: one accidental, the other intentional. First, Regan's car, the blue one in the foreground, is pointing toward the restaurant. In the beginning of the chapter, it was pointing away from the restaurant. I noticed this after I started colouring and wasn't about to fix it.
Bats. Those are supposed to be bats in the lights. The story, however, takes place in mid-January when bats are hibernating, so seasonal “oops.” Plus, they're a tad too big. But I wanted something fluttering around in the light, so I persisted with the error.
The spelling of “Wolfes,” however, isn't an error.
Cheers, P.K.
adobedragon at 7:27AM, June 20, 2007
magickmaker: Regarding cars... Really? Heh. Well, cool. Truth is, I HATE drawing man-made things. Thanks!
magickmaker at 6:27PM, June 14, 2007
Meh, global warming prolly screwed 'em up. We found dead bats outside my job at two completely different times of year. You do cars well. They look nice.
adobedragon at 5:05PM, June 14, 2007
Tantz_Aerine: re: the writing. Thanks a bunch! Chilly, chilly little bats.
Tantz_Aerine at 2:31PM, June 14, 2007
I am sure nobody will mind bats in mid January ;) Still good writing :) I wonder if he knows she's Wolf.