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Chapter Eight - Page 25

jgib99 on March 9, 2010

Hello Duckies. Sorry for the delay between updates. Hope you enjoyed the new page. he second panel came out kinda bleh. I'm still getting used to inking with the art tablet.

Thanks everybody who commented on the last page. I'll reply a little later today because I'm finishing this pretty late and I'm sleepy.

I'll see you for the next update when we'll find out what Mercedes has to say about Persephone's offer. Rock On!!

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jgib99 at 4:23PM, March 15, 2010

[b]DAJB[/b]- Thanks for helping me out. I have a tendency to rush when I'm lettering, and this page is no exception. I'm sorry I took so long to answer. I was going to reply in the author's note on the next update (As many DD'ers have been doing). But I noticed that DD was spazzing out again, and many of the updates weren't going through. I'll try to update the next page tomorrow. :D

DAJB at 1:13AM, March 12, 2010

Cool page as always. One suggestion you might want to consider: when lettering, make the first line in a balloon shorter than those below it. In the second panel, for example, you could have put the "[i]You[/i]" (Balloon 1) and "[i]One of[/i] (Balloon 2) on a separate lines, above the rest of the text. That way the shape of the text block should be more like the shape of the balloon. just a suggestion - and not a biggie!

jgib99 at 9:25PM, March 10, 2010

[b]amanda[/b]- Persephone's such a beeyotch. [b]ghostrunner[/b]- Hah ha. Yup! [b]Peipei[/b]- Thanks. ^_^ Thanks for the comments and high fives.

ghostrunner at 3:58AM, March 10, 2010

wow, stoned

amanda at 1:26AM, March 10, 2010

That's not polite at all!