Hey metsuke, sorry for the very late reply and thanks for the advice! I've fixed page 14 and will consider what you've said. I'll be sticking with the font choices because it's part of the character's inner voice as much as it seems unorthodox to do so. Hand written-isque letters are coming next page and so is more rotten flesh eating!
NICE INKS! Though twisted and gross...the narrative is begging for hand letterring and there is a typo on an earlier page for 'microwave'.
Now this may not apply entirely to you; panel repetition is tricky and needs to be handled in a way so as not to look lazy. The last thing one wants to do is cheapen great art, otherwise WELL DONE and I'm looking forward to more rotten flesh eating!
yung at 9:49AM, Dec. 28, 2009
Hey metsuke, sorry for the very late reply and thanks for the advice! I've fixed page 14 and will consider what you've said. I'll be sticking with the font choices because it's part of the character's inner voice as much as it seems unorthodox to do so. Hand written-isque letters are coming next page and so is more rotten flesh eating!
metsuke at 7:41AM, Nov. 13, 2009
NICE INKS! Though twisted and gross...the narrative is begging for hand letterring and there is a typo on an earlier page for 'microwave'. Now this may not apply entirely to you; panel repetition is tricky and needs to be handled in a way so as not to look lazy. The last thing one wants to do is cheapen great art, otherwise WELL DONE and I'm looking forward to more rotten flesh eating!