Again, beautiful page. Only the typo in panel 2 ("the man mumbling IN to himself . . .") trips up the reading. Judging from how detailed the art is, I figure typos probably would bug you, and I know how easily little things like this can be missed when you read the stuff you write. (I've done it a number of times myself.)
Fino Rexall at 6:13PM, April 7, 2013
Thanks for catching that. Just finished that page this morning.
EssayBee at 5:19PM, April 7, 2013
Again, beautiful page. Only the typo in panel 2 ("the man mumbling IN to himself . . .") trips up the reading. Judging from how detailed the art is, I figure typos probably would bug you, and I know how easily little things like this can be missed when you read the stuff you write. (I've done it a number of times myself.)