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Ziffy88 on Nov. 12, 2008
More awkward moments between two individuals! Yay! For a scifi story I think I need to balance the sci fi and character aspects alot more. Also alot of my dialog seems to go no where. I need to focus on whether it moves plot or characters.
anonymous?
Warpedwenger at 6:21PM, Nov. 13, 2008
Cool how she's stickin' out of the last panel. Also what Trevor said.
trevoramueller at 9:28AM, Nov. 13, 2008
I like how the character in panel 3 waves but doesn't have to say anything, and she responds in panel 4. Very natural conversation flow there.
Warpedwenger at 6:21PM, Nov. 13, 2008
Cool how she's stickin' out of the last panel. Also what Trevor said.
trevoramueller at 9:28AM, Nov. 13, 2008
I like how the character in panel 3 waves but doesn't have to say anything, and she responds in panel 4. Very natural conversation flow there.