My dear friend, you're very helpful. I thank you for taking time to evaluate my work. And yes, I will seek for professional help for my upcoming projects and bring you all something of better quality. We are all learning, and I too need all the help I can get, so, thanks! I'm thinking on making a webseries of the IDH story, something different. I'll keep you updated. ^ ^
I'll watch the vid as soon as I get the chance.
your art, as always, is ecxellent. You might need to look into getting an editor who is a native speaker to help you though. I'm not trying to be maen by saying this, because your English is very good, but the construction is a little awkward. I think the structure might make sense in a different laguage, but in English it doesn't work to use "them" unless you previously refernced who "them" is, and we havn't even seen these characters for a few pages.
Again, I really am not trying to be mean, I simply think that some editing could give your story that extra little boost it needs. Besides, once I start my webcomic I give you full permission to blast my art to pieces. Lord knows I'm gonna need all the help I can get :P
Geo Delmaro at 7:06AM, March 25, 2011
My dear friend, you're very helpful. I thank you for taking time to evaluate my work. And yes, I will seek for professional help for my upcoming projects and bring you all something of better quality. We are all learning, and I too need all the help I can get, so, thanks! I'm thinking on making a webseries of the IDH story, something different. I'll keep you updated. ^ ^
dragonestea at 6:58AM, March 25, 2011
I'll watch the vid as soon as I get the chance. your art, as always, is ecxellent. You might need to look into getting an editor who is a native speaker to help you though. I'm not trying to be maen by saying this, because your English is very good, but the construction is a little awkward. I think the structure might make sense in a different laguage, but in English it doesn't work to use "them" unless you previously refernced who "them" is, and we havn't even seen these characters for a few pages. Again, I really am not trying to be mean, I simply think that some editing could give your story that extra little boost it needs. Besides, once I start my webcomic I give you full permission to blast my art to pieces. Lord knows I'm gonna need all the help I can get :P
Geo Delmaro at 6:03AM, March 25, 2011
IDH Synopsis Video http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MTubNE5s5Kc