Chapter 1 pg 8
the2ndredbaron on Jan. 15, 2009
Hey in case you thought there was no action in this series let me tell you that you are wrong. Tune in tomorrow for action. Also if you have any critiques, did I spell that right?, feel free to say them.
As always thanks for stopping by and please check out the ECT in the game forum.
dragonrider at 3:58PM, Jan. 16, 2009
critiques, yes you spelled that correctly, however in the last panel you used are when you should have said our. Are denotes placement, our denotes possesion, ie.The groups are meeting to kick the Charons' butt. Our eyes see through the eyes of those who are meeting to try to kick our butts.
robzidious at 12:35PM, Jan. 16, 2009
I'm with Shinu on this. Action in comics is always best when there's a good story behind it. These first few pages have given us a great introduction into the world of Interim State. I'm hooked now.
ShinuZero at 8:37AM, Jan. 16, 2009
I can't wait. Action is always better when there's an excellent writing behind it.