The Note: End of Chapter 1
draconia11 on Dec. 29, 2008
I wrote the note out by hand on some crumply folded paper, and this was the result. I tried to write sort of scratchy, so you might have trouble reading it (*curses bad handwriting*!!)
~Just in case you can't read it here is what it says:
Chiel,
I know that i haven't been able to do much for you while you have been here except maybe sneak in the occasional book or two. But, I have a plan for your future, and I will not let this facility ruin your life any more!
I was able to convince the boss that I should bring you lunch tomorrow. I have obtained a key. I can't talk with you because the other guards would be suspicious, so just trust in this note.
Tomorrow you will win your freedom!
-Frances
tiffawolf at 3:43AM, Jan. 20, 2009
haha u have my type of hand writing so it was easy for me to read without thinking,lmao hahaha neat idia for this pg
The Real Macabre at 11:20AM, Jan. 11, 2009
I was able to read it just fine. That was a great artistic choice. It adds a page with an entirely different style to your comic.
Tatsu at 6:02PM, Jan. 5, 2009
ahh! awesome! a real note! cool! X3
GoGo Ghosty at 3:22PM, Jan. 5, 2009
the real paper combined with the "crinkle" sound effect makes it seem like the reader is the in Chiel's place....I like that^^ (and your handwriting is WAAAAAAY better then mine...)
Darlo at 12:14PM, Jan. 4, 2009
Nice touch, the real paper. (and your handwritings awesome!)
Mimiento at 6:57PM, Jan. 1, 2009
Much more effective than if you had just drawn the note, good choice :D
TheFlyingGreenMonkey at 9:34PM, Dec. 30, 2008
It could be a little more crumpled XD
allanah at 6:36PM, Dec. 30, 2008
I like how you made it a real crumpled note. Good effect :)