CH2: Three &

Allan on April 22, 2024

A mistake I made the first time I rendered this chapter was inconsistent border linework. I'm not sure what inspired it, but I drew the borders of chapter 2 with a much thicker brush. I didn't realize it at the time, but it totally threw off the visual cohesion of the pages, and it was subconsciously very busy and distracting.

The chapter reads much better now that the thick black lines are gone. Plus, I tweaked some text bubbles! Never too late to fix some stuff up, I suppose.