chapter 01 - 04

poison on Jan. 8, 2008

Now it´s finished… It´s so long ago I´ve drawn these lineart, but in holydays I didn´t found the time for coloring.

Here are mutch panels, so it to 5 or 6 hours to fill in the colour. I wanted to try a style where the skin looks good and smothy. My favorite is the second panel. I like how the girl looks. The hands in the third one are bad, but anyway. I try to get better with every page and I prefer to see this comic as an whole doodle for training.
I think I´ve managed the forth panel all right. *hurray, first Panel of Jarret in his human form where he can be seen better.*

To the Comments of the last page:
- I will try to do some tricks that I don´t have to change the rating. I like when everybody can read a comic. I for myself have my own opinion about ratings and would like not to look so mutch at agelines, but there are rule I have agreed to. So I´ll try to stay within the rules to keep my Work free for everyone.

- Yes, it´s not the newest idear, but there are plenty stories which are not new. Maybe the differences between my story and others will come out later, maybe not. I wanted to start typically, without a long text before the first side in which the backround is explained. Everything should come out within the story.

- And to you all: THANK YOU VERY MUTCH for the comments. I like to get feedback.