jeriah at 4:02PM, Dec. 26, 2006

I was trying to convey that even though it was a short walk from the boat to the island, in Jeriah’s mind it felt like eternity, a life changing event. Kinda like where the story starts to unfold. (which it does) I guess it did not come out on paper the way it went in my mind. Thanks for comment btw

lefarce at 12:29PM, Dec. 26, 2006

Suggestion? Don't make a bunch of pointless arbitrary panels if you're only going to put in a single line of dialog. I.E., it's boring. Shots of legs and arms and stone facial expressions =/= entertainment.