2 - A Visitor!
Ituko on Sept. 25, 2006
Hmm, I wonder if L was measuring their height during the entire battle? And, the little split inbetween panel 2 is because I had a huge blank space, so I just filled it with the black and white scratches.. and then it looked akward so I put them there. Althogh, it still looks kinda akward..
So.. sleepy.. Must.. sleep… now..
SmartSpriter at 12:30PM, Sept. 27, 2006
Very good. BUT, panels 3 and 4 are a bit hard to understand. One of the things I (and all the other members of TASC/Whatever our new name is) I hate is mindless Sprite Tournament comics. The battles and graphics usually suck, and there's no plot at all. Your graphics are good, and the battles good so far, but I want to seem some story. That means, maybe a plot thickening with L behind the scenes, or maybe one of the losing fighters coming back later for revenge. (Oh, and just to help out, if L's gonna be a main character, this http://www.deathgod.org/main.php?x=info/c_l and this: http://www.drworm.net/lautism.htm should help. Read them through!)