Hereeeeeeee's Lyra!
PKNESS on June 26, 2010
Yeah so I was thinking KD could use a partner, so Lyra is gonna be with him for a bit. Argh, bad news, my uncle is going on a business trip tommorow, and he's taking his laptop! So, he's not coming back until tommorow. :'( Yeah, so you'll have to go without us for a day! Sorry. :P
xVegitox at 5:59PM, June 28, 2010
My Broskii, sloooow down on the story. You should have had your character approach Lyra or something. Your resizing has already been metioned, so I'll tell you the other stuff. Panel 3 the front of Lyra's bike wheel is missing, you gotta motion blur the WHOLE sprite. Panel 4 is a good try at a fancier effect, but don't go for fancy if you can't make it look good. That panel would have looked 100x better had you just left it normal with out that zoom blur and just had the "CRASH" sound effect.
cheesen8or at 12:39AM, June 28, 2010
okay, the sprites are resized incorrectly, the text is outside the text bubbles, panels four and fived are randomly cropped into, and the scenario is really unrealistic, once you crash your bike you don't usually say your name and show your pokemon to the first pokemon you see. but other than that it's fine.