Page 11: issues 5 (On the Run) and Special 1 (Sysyphus Part 1)
shastab24 on May 16, 2012
Do you want to be a part of a crossover project of the same vein as the Crossover Wars? If so, please PQ me or e-mail me at karamesser@hotmail.com. Not only will it be a fun crossover project, but I plan to make a print edition with the proceeds going to the Hero Initiative, a charity that helps comic creators in need. Those participating (either fully or with their characters) include Karabear Comics Unlimited, Trans Dimensional Trans Superheroes, Wonder Team, Duelling Heroes, Harkovast, Victory, and Heroic Comics.
Top page: I actually like panel 4 there–it's a great reaction shot. Panel 3, meanwhile, is a rather odd drawing, indeed. But hey, you get a view of what Astral's physical form currently looks like.
Bottom page: Yes, it's a bit of a rehash, since a similar joke was used for the first challenge, but I also can't draw dancing very well. Just read issue 4 to see what I mean (two dancing scenes, with both using similar poses that don't really look like dancing). Also, an alternative song I thought of for this page after I'd already finished it was the Time Warp. It might have actually been better, because the howl in the first panel looks so weird, in part due to me not putting musical notes around it.
Tomorrow: Astral gets back to Sparkle and the villain, and Tempore gets some last information before leaving the Queue
KAM at 6:16AM, June 2, 2012
A good song would have been "I don't dance, don't ask me!" ;-)
Escutcheon at 9:50PM, May 17, 2012
I, for one, want to see Tempore dance. YOU CAN. Dance is made of order (consistent steps and patterns). /sagenod.
shastab24 at 7:38PM, May 16, 2012
I like the SMASH, too. Considering the page was hastily drawn, it's nice to now I have some good bits in there. And there definitely is something to seeing Astral actually go into his astral form. I also look at the page and feel sorry for him--I realize I wanted his physical form to look very feminine, but in doingso I did give him boobs far larger than anyone could work with. I'll go into it later in the comic sometime about why he doesn't get surgery to remove them (quick answer: money).
Hogan at 1:16PM, May 16, 2012
Top Page: Nice effect there! :cheers: