Chaosvii7 at 5:49PM, May 4, 2008

Everyone does know the hooded member is MARLUXIA right? I mean, there's a scene where he lifts up the hood! Other than that, It's fine.

Nikai Nockturne at 3:10PM, Dec. 29, 2006

OoO...buh buh bum!!!

hs5k at 12:50PM, Dec. 12, 2006

dun dun dah!

jef dam5 at 5:36AM, Dec. 12, 2006

And also important, don't rush. I take my time and do about three to four days about one comic or else I'm afraid I'll lose the inspiration and keeping the fun in comics. Also, not rushing means you have time to think about it and highten the quality, yes even in paint.

Gretcheny565 at 10:47PM, Dec. 11, 2006

*bangs head on desk* Do this do that do BLAH. What are you? My mom?! (sorry, just woke up) Im gonna be very busy today so I might not be able to make a comic today

Blaze of merc at 2:40PM, Dec. 11, 2006

its good but jef has a point tails would prove better to make tails: connect 2 lines to the bubbles (make sure both lines are connected to each other at the tip) other then that great

jef dam5 at 2:09PM, Dec. 11, 2006

I suppose the making sense here is in its limits. And gamemaster, since this is a comic she kinda makes up the storyline. The next step I would take would definetly to make some real tails instead of those *cough* lines.

Gretcheny565 at 12:47PM, Dec. 11, 2006

1. I wantd more people in it 2. Lots of spelling mistakes you made. Mistakes. heartless. Ansem. Theres nothing about "org.13 (nobotes) on this. 3. I couldnt find the kingdom Hearts blue heart... thing. 4. Who cares if they arent evil

gamemaster at 12:10PM, Dec. 11, 2006

just read it and found some misstakes. 1. the flag is a heatless flag and the tile says Organization 13( nobotes ). 2. Cloud, DIZ, and ansme riku are not in O. 13. 3. cloud and DIZ are not evil. look at it agin and tell me if im wrong.

Rubygem at 6:37AM, Dec. 11, 2006

lol sweet